I’m choosing to talk about a particular writing problem today, and perhaps open discussion on it. Today’s problem is: laughter.
Laughter can be expressed in a myriad of ways in your novel depending on its significance. Sometimes it’s merely a placeholder in dialogue.
Ie: Will laughed. “So this is what laughter is, huh?”
In those cases, it doesn’t serve as much purpose. It shows character mood and perhaps their reaction to what made them laugh. Maybe it shows that they laugh at inappropriate times?
In other situations, the laughter might be more plot-worthy. A moment where all characters burst into laughter could be a highlight to the plot. A moment of tension relief, or significant bonding to the characters.
ie. Everyone fell silent for a moment, but Will’s expression finally cracked – everyone burst into laughter almost as one. Rex chuckled into his hands. Will couldn’t hold himself up and fell to the ground, practically convulsing in laughter. Lusari looked surprised for a moment, but, realizing Will was okay, quickly dissolved into her own laughter, tears streaming down her cheeks.
The second paints more of an image, but it’s something I would only use for certain significance. Explaining every laugh like this would simply waste time and distract from your story. This laughter, though, explains some of the characters’ personalities and quirks, as well as it being a plot point as a relief of tension.
Of course, there are other ways to express it. Laughed, chuckled, cackled, roared in laughter… Combining that with the characters’ motion and dialogue, it’s possible to characterize your characters without spelling it out for your readers. A character who hide their mouth while they laugh may be insecure. One who laughs openly might be more outgoing. Giggling is more girlish, while roaring in laughter is more loud and outspoken.
What are some examples of characterization by laughter that you’ve used? Also, feel free to post about your own suggestions and ideas in the comments! Thanks for reading!
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